Sorry to be a pain but could I ask all players involved in DS to attempt to post in the next few days please?

I appreciate that Nex has posted recently, that Sure has an emergency of sorts at the while, PJK has an exam on the morrow and that Hare has been invaded by a gaggle of friends at his place this weekend, but If I post again tomorrow it'll look like I'm talking to myself

What I was gonna suggest is that I update Tuesday instead of Monday to give you guys a chance to write something. Its approaching the finale now so I'll like to pick up the pace a little if thats possible please?

So in Summary if you guys could post something by Tuesday 26th Jan I'd appreciate it please! (I wont update until the last few hours of that day giving people a chance to post ^^)

If we really have to LW....

Nah I'll do it tomorrow night

Well, I've posted. Sorry it's short and sweet but I didn't want to move us all down the corridor or elevator or anything sine we're probably all writing our posts and I wouldn't want to force anyone to start again! lol

But it's got the ball rolling for me again at least. Sorry it's taken so long to post Sir, but I've felt Lilin isn't in any position to start deciding the course of action the group takes (hence this latest post being so short).

I do however really want to see how the finale kicks off! /we'reallgonnadie!!

No problemo sir, I appreciate you finding the time to do it, its good to know you survived your "Weekend Invasion"(tm)!

I get the impression that if she could convince Creed to do it, Lilin would be asking for a line straight out of Hick's/ Ripley's repitoire:

Ripley wrote:

I say we take off and nuke the entire site from orbit. It's the only way to be sure.

I might have to post something tomorrow as I don't have the internet as the missus' place. Is that ok?

Done although it was a rush job

Cheers Mr P

I do love Ril's flashbacks as its a great way to introduce her to the story and make her as important as all the other players involved.

One suggestion though, if I may? Although after a couple of lines of reading you tend to realise that we're looking at what happened to Ril previously, its not immediately evident at the start of the post - I find it a wee bit disorientating.

Would you mind either making her flashbacks in italics or a different colour or something similar so its immediately evident whether you're writing about the past or present please?

It may not seem necc but it would make easier reading for an old timer like me

ATTENTION DS PLAYERS!

Ello you 'orrible lot. I was just wondering, would anyone have any objections if I steered the plot unceremoniously underground to the next part of the story? Things are starting slow up again and that makes me twitchy

If anyone has any problems with my doing this please let me know by tomorrow night otherwise I'll move it in that direction.

That's fine by me Mr DM, Sir. I was just hanging on for a bit to see if Nex was going to post in reply to Creed, but yah...

Muchas Gracias. I'll wait to hear from at least one other before beginning the next update, but I wont post until tomorrow seeing as Sure may still not be back (considering his anti-netness right now) and Nex having not been on.

I'm fine with it, we need a collective boot up the @%&#!