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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:35 pm

Cheers, glad you're enjoying it. That second part turned out to be a lot longer than I was expecting, but then again I had a fair bit of conversation to cover :S

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:44 pm

Part 3 is now uploaded.

I hope you don't mind me using your creation of Neabel / Deimos too much PJK, he and his Chistori guard seemed so bored after AWS that I just had to give the poor guys some air-time!

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:58 pm

Ooooh! Aleena the traitor? Hm. I wonder what the Falleen would think if he overheard this conversation? This also wants me to make Skursir's story deeper - you writing is so compelling! Very Happy Good luck on the fourth part as well.

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:02 pm

hehehe cheers mate!

Well technically she's not so much a traitor as a double agent - from Deimos' side of things she's merely an observer, she's not meant to do anything to the agency except evaluate them for a possible future alliance.

She's loyal to TMF though, and would die to save his life if necc. At some point before launch Paul & I will get together and explain how the two met and at that point, you'll see she owes him the SW equivilent of a life-debt.

But yeah, I think it's best she doesn't mention Neabel to the Falleen, just in case Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:15 pm

Great stuff as always! Can't wait to read the final instalment of this! TopHat
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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:43 pm

Harewood wrote:
Great stuff as always! Can't wait to read the final instalment of this! TopHat


Mota PartIV wrote:


Part IV

The Jedi turns up, Aleena realises it an old friend form her childhood. They embrace, swap stories and bugger off on his ship, forsaking this whole silly Sith business and open a flower shop on Alderaan.


lol!


Ha! ok so that might not be how it concludes Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:50 pm

Methinks it's Hollister/Ree (or whatever character you've got lined up). He or she has tracked Aleena down to Neable and threatens to tell the head green-guy. Aleena gets upset, kills the chap (effective way of removing over-crowded alts) and blames it on an airlock incident.
There! Your Part IV all mangled-like Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:59 pm

Haha nice theory! Anyone else got any?

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Tue Jan 19, 2010 8:40 pm

Love it, love it, love it. Looking forward to the next part. I love you

As for theories of who the Jedi is, its obviously Commander Shepard, recruiting for a suicide mission. That guy is always turning up in his little ship looking to recruit people.

Humans are disappearing. That can't happen. Now the fate of humanity lies with a Hapan and a bunch of other weirdos. They don't expect him to survive, but that never stopped him before. Assemble your team. Fight for the lost. Rated M for Mature.

Oh wait, wrong IP.
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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Jan 20, 2010 2:56 pm

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Love it, love it, love it. Looking forward to the next part. I love you

As for theories of who the Jedi is, its obviously Commander Shepard, recruiting for a suicide mission. That guy is always turning up in his little ship looking to recruit people.

Humans are disappearing. That can't happen. Now the fate of humanity lies with a Hapan and a bunch of other weirdos. They don't expect him to survive, but that never stopped him before. Assemble your team. Fight for the lost. Rated M for Mature.

Oh wait, wrong IP.


lol! Yeah she can replace subject Zero Very Happy

Great read LW kinda forgot to comment at part 2 woops, Sith being civil always feels kinda odd to me eating drinking etc poisening each other seems much more in character Smile
Dont worry about using Neabel too much (as long as your not planning to kill him Razz ) its good to see they're alive and well after the the events of AWS which would have been over by now.
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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:22 pm

There we go, PartIV is up.

'tis all done Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:29 pm

Dun-dun-DUUUUHHHN!! Just how far does the rabbit hole go? Suspect

Brilliant backstory LW! I feel like I understand Aleena (a little) better now. Meditations on the Abyss does a wonderful job of making it clear she's very much the Dark Jedi and not a Sith at all. And she's quickly becoming a very real person in my head^^

Thanks for another excellent read, sah. I enjoyed it immensely! bounce
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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:57 pm

Glad you enjoyed it, it was good fun to write!

It was nice to explore her psyche more as well, touch on her vulnerable side a bit. I'd almost feel sorry for her if she wasn't such and evil biatch!

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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:13 pm

Ooooh a clifhanger, great read once again LW cheers

Good to see you didnt go down the all powerful Sith route and had Aleena actually vunerable to the Jedi, what'll be the fallout with Diemos though Question
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PostSubject: Re: Meditations on the Abyss   Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:16 pm

PrioryJK wrote:


Good to see you didnt go down the all powerful Sith route and had Aleena actually vunerable to the Jedi


Yeah well when Thelcar had the sudden realization that everything he's been doing for the last 16 years was a lie, that his entire reason for living had been to fulfil a revenge that was misplaced, he understandibly was not the usual mental fortress the Jedi have to be.

And Miss Fel is an opportunist Smile

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