Cheers, glad you're enjoying it. That second part turned out to be a lot longer than I was expecting, but then again I had a fair bit of conversation to cover :S

Part 3 is now uploaded.

I hope you don't mind me using your creation of Neabel / Deimos too much PJK, he and his Chistori guard seemed so bored after AWS that I just had to give the poor guys some air-time!

Ooooh! Aleena the traitor? Hm. I wonder what the Falleen would think if he overheard this conversation? This also wants me to make Skursir's story deeper - you writing is so compelling! Good luck on the fourth part as well.

hehehe cheers mate!

Well technically she's not so much a traitor as a double agent - from Deimos' side of things she's merely an observer, she's not meant to do anything to the agency except evaluate them for a possible future alliance.

She's loyal to TMF though, and would die to save his life if necc. At some point before launch Paul & I will get together and explain how the two met and at that point, you'll see she owes him the SW equivilent of a life-debt.

But yeah, I think it's best she doesn't mention Neabel to the Falleen, just in case

Great stuff as always! Can't wait to read the final instalment of this!

Methinks it's Hollister/Ree (or whatever character you've got lined up). He or she has tracked Aleena down to Neable and threatens to tell the head green-guy. Aleena gets upset, kills the chap (effective way of removing over-crowded alts) and blames it on an airlock incident.
There! Your Part IV all mangled-like

Haha nice theory! Anyone else got any?

Love it, love it, love it. Looking forward to the next part.

As for theories of who the Jedi is, its obviously Commander Shepard, recruiting for a suicide mission. That guy is always turning up in his little ship looking to recruit people.

Humans are disappearing. That can't happen. Now the fate of humanity lies with a Hapan and a bunch of other weirdos. They don't expect him to survive, but that never stopped him before. Assemble your team. Fight for the lost. Rated M for Mature.

Oh wait, wrong IP.

There we go, PartIV is up.

'tis all done

Dun-dun-DUUUUHHHN!! Just how far does the rabbit hole go?

Brilliant backstory LW! I feel like I understand Aleena (a little) better now. Meditations on the Abyss does a wonderful job of making it clear she's very much the Dark Jedi and not a Sith at all. And she's quickly becoming a very real person in my head^^

Thanks for another excellent read, sah. I enjoyed it immensely!

Glad you enjoyed it, it was good fun to write!

It was nice to explore her psyche more as well, touch on her vulnerable side a bit. I'd almost feel sorry for her if she wasn't such and evil biatch!

Ooooh a clifhanger, great read once again LW

Good to see you didnt go down the all powerful Sith route and had Aleena actually vunerable to the Jedi, what'll be the fallout with Diemos though